Tuesday 10 November 2015

Writing

Early in the morning in the local shop one round soft faced mum wearing her usual blue and red outfit was buying groceries.

Lurking in the dark behind  the shelf the solitary figure of a ginger,white,barrel like cat. Was on the prowl for food and he thought yes that looks good.

Little did he know that mum got a can of pepper from the large selection of tins and cans,sitting on the shelf.Back at home greedy cat still on the lookout for food thought he had sniffed out a tasty treat. Meanwhile mum was peering out from a behind the door wotcha and said this will teach that cat a lesson with a smirk on her face and thought this is going to be good.Then all of a sudden greedy cat fawned out what his tasty treat was it was peeper.

Then greedy cat scraped away he said I am never going to eat the food from mum again.Meanwhile mum was chuckling she thought I really tort that cat a lesson as she walked to the kitchen.

2 comments:

  1. I like the way you started two of your paragraphs, lurking in the dark and little did he know. Now, try and start you final paragraph in a similar way.

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  2. your things are ciil

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